Despite being set in the Wild West, the vocabulary and sentence structure used are distinctly simple and modern, and could almost be described as formal. I get the impression that English might not be the writer’s first language, but is otherwise technically proficient. The dialogue is pretty stiff and, much like the overview, full of redundancy. The result is a mixture of weak, and sometimes immature dialogue, and a confusing story. I get the impression that the story tries to have a coherent plot, but suffers the hurdle of trying to make the adult elements (eventually) work within that plot. As of V0.3, the game is pretty short and could probably be read through in like 20-30 minutes. An interesting and promising project with good models and excellent animation) The game has an adequate plot and original in-game mechanics) If the developer makes it possible to save game progress, the game can be given the highest rating).
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